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Mina on a car

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I'll probably tweak some things in a few days, but for no it's finished.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I havent given critique before this so I hope you find it fair!
If you did draw the background you nailed it like BOOM! but as for the girl the pose is great, real sexy but no vulgarity there! But her hands are too small, when you make hands just see they are big enough to cover ALMOST the whole face, plus the whole right arm right from the shoulder doesn't really looks like its resting on the car more like its reaching for something nearby like the keys. AlsoI think the nose is quite big which cuts a few points out of her appeal, Try making it a bit slender next time! But Other than that I'd hood on her curves if I were a boy or gay! Overall I think its a great piece!